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Wednesday 15 February 2017

Anthony Holiday writing 2017



As my family and I were driving into the car park space at the beach we ran over a rat. And disgustingly we ran over its face. When my sister stepped out of the door and crushed its body like a ant luckily she was wearing shoes but the rats guts were still hanging on her shoe she screamed and ran into the ocean she wiggled her foot like no one has ever seen before and that day she decided to never wear it again . As she was getting her shoe wet and we were crossing the road we saw kids coming back screaming “I want to stay!” I knew that day I was going to get sunburned I could smell the steak and the sausages cooking on the BBQ. I could hear the splash of the water. Apart from the rat the day was  gorgeously great.


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1 comment:

  1. Is that photo real of yours, because it was soooo raining everyday.

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